The still waters
Reflecting passing emotions
The busy aquatic life
Parallels the busybody mind
The fauna deep and grounded
Mirroring the eternal reality
The ripples on the surface
An expression of the timed journey
The ecosystem of the lagoon
Descriptive of our battles within
In response to dVerse
A beautiful poem Saroj
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Thank you Sadje π
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Beautiful, Saroj π π π
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Oh I love the way you see the lagoon from the depth as a mirror of ourselves.
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This leaves me reflecting on how nature is a beautiful teacher if we pause, observe and reflect. Lovely words.
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I love how you shared about the different aspects of the ecosystem there in such a simple and beautiful way; and you created a metaphor for all of existence.π€― Wonderful!
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Thank you dear
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Very welcome.βΊοΈ
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Saroj, your poem “Existence” masterfully parallels the still waters of a lagoon with the complexities of the mind. The vivid imagery of the busy aquatic life reflecting the busybody mind and the ripples as expressions of the timed journey adds a profound layer to your contemplative piece. Well done.
~David
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Thank you David for your kind words π
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Saroj, so true how outer often mimics or reflects inner.
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Thank you π
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A lovely and thoughtful write, Saroj!
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Thank you dearπ
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My pleasure. π
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